Monday, November 29, 2010


“Could you PLEASE move out of my way,”said Maddy in a stern voice.
“Why?” asked the checky little kid sitting on the beam in front of Maddy.
“Because,” Whispered Maddy throw gritted teeth “I’m in a race and thanks to you I,m now losing,”
“all right,then,”He jumped off and ran away.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Zia
    What you did well: You had all the right stuff
    what you could do better next time: check your grammer