Sunday, December 5, 2010

Free writing

the spie creeped round the the back of the camp trying to find a way in, it had been a long day , tramping 26 miles across the dessert his job was hard but the life of his family depended on his sucess.
Suddenly there was amovment just ahead of him as a men came out for it was now there shift on watch this was the best time to strike when the men were destarcted.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010


“Could you PLEASE move out of my way?” questioned Maddy in a stern voice.
“Why?” asked the cheeky little kid sitting on the beam in front of Maddy.
“Because,” whispered Maddy through gritted teeth, “I’m in a race and thanks to you I’m now losing.”
“All right, then.” He jumped off and ran away.

Athletics Writing

"BANG" the clappers went. Paige was starting "ooh come on," I mutter to myself. With out realising I had started jumping on the roaring red track. Paige to Sara good change.

Our inter schools relay teams our versing the teachers and the parents. At the moment the parents are smashing up.

Sara is running towards me determination etched all over her face. I start to run building up speed as Sara came closer and closer.thump the baton reached my out stretched arm, I closed my hands around it and ran round the bend,at about half way I was going as fast as I could my legs seared with the pain and stress of running so fast. Its like my legs are going as fast as a fan at full speed.

I love the feeling of cutting throw the air and wind parting to let me throw.

WOW I can't believe it I've caught Mike. Now its all up to you Ansley I passed the baton on. We were even with the boys team. No not any More we are in front. "Hold on Ansley hold on," I said aloud.

"YES" we beat the boys I clenched fist and punched the air.