Sunday, December 5, 2010

Free writing

the spie creeped round the the back of the camp trying to find a way in, it had been a long day , tramping 26 miles across the dessert his job was hard but the life of his family depended on his sucess.
Suddenly there was amovment just ahead of him as a men came out for it was now there shift on watch this was the best time to strike when the men were destarcted.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010


“Could you PLEASE move out of my way?” questioned Maddy in a stern voice.
“Why?” asked the cheeky little kid sitting on the beam in front of Maddy.
“Because,” whispered Maddy through gritted teeth, “I’m in a race and thanks to you I’m now losing.”
“All right, then.” He jumped off and ran away.

Athletics Writing

"BANG" the clappers went. Paige was starting "ooh come on," I mutter to myself. With out realising I had started jumping on the roaring red track. Paige to Sara good change.

Our inter schools relay teams our versing the teachers and the parents. At the moment the parents are smashing up.

Sara is running towards me determination etched all over her face. I start to run building up speed as Sara came closer and closer.thump the baton reached my out stretched arm, I closed my hands around it and ran round the bend,at about half way I was going as fast as I could my legs seared with the pain and stress of running so fast. Its like my legs are going as fast as a fan at full speed.

I love the feeling of cutting throw the air and wind parting to let me throw.

WOW I can't believe it I've caught Mike. Now its all up to you Ansley I passed the baton on. We were even with the boys team. No not any More we are in front. "Hold on Ansley hold on," I said aloud.

"YES" we beat the boys I clenched fist and punched the air.

Monday, November 29, 2010


“Could you PLEASE move out of my way,”said Maddy in a stern voice.
“Why?” asked the checky little kid sitting on the beam in front of Maddy.
“Because,” Whispered Maddy throw gritted teeth “I’m in a race and thanks to you I,m now losing,”
“all right,then,”He jumped off and ran away.

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

free writing

silence fell over the crowd as he stood up" now in rememberance of the brave young men who on this day 1 year ago died inm battle for there king and there country i sir robert heavy sword am going to tell astory from my own experence. the battle of jerusilu8n. so here we go for king and country yelled the troops as they charged across the dryopen plane of the holy land. I was not yet nighted so was behind the nights but in the front row of the common solliders.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Centre Stage

*stand in the wings
*this is it
*black out
*deep breaths stay calm
*breathing as steady as gentle waves rolling in upon the beach
*lights turn on
*music starts

This is it, I'm ready to go standing in the black curtained wings on the side of the stage, heart pounding with all its might against my chest.

"Good luck." murmured Maddy.

OK stay calm Zia, stay calm slowly breath in, now out. I'm trying to keep my breathing as steady as gentle waves rhythmically rolling right up on the soft sandy beach then falling slowly back down.

Its black out now we're on, please don't muck up, dance yourself proud Zia. You can do it. I walk upon the stage my chin held high. I stand straight and still in my position. I drain all expression from my face, face now blank I stand waiting, waiting for the lights to turn on and the music to blare!