Sunday, May 16, 2010

The Firery Street

As I run across the colourful leaves at the bottom of my drive way. The street is empty apart from me. Crunch they crackle under my feet, I love autumn it has an air of freedom and peace. I lye down upon the firery carpet of leaves and look up into the branches of the firery trees I feel like there is nothing in the world but the tree and I. it is so peaceful here I breath in deeply the air feels damp, fresh and crisp. A light breeze blows across the street picking up leaves and dropping them again.
I picked up a leave it is a deep chocolaty brown. It feels as rough as sand paper I turned it over in my hand this side is as smooth as a white board I think.
I get up and run across the street "Yipy" I shout I feel at home here. I feel safe here in autumn it's so peaceful.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

an afiganistan man

well I think that he has had a hard life. His eyes show it they have a kind sadness in them that bores right into me like I was being x-rayed to see if I was going to help him. He seemed an old man. which means it must be even harder for him. It looks like he hasn't been cared for very well because of the rinkles on his head and the sadness in his eyes.
He has a greecy mastosh like a walruce and wheres a grey turban with silvery grey fur wrapped around it. he has creased lines going from his nose up through his head.

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Mrs Walker

After I've described Mrs Walker our jump jam you will know what it means to have energy!

I can tell that Mrs Walker wants to get the most out of what she loves, but not only does she want herself to get the most out of it She wants every one else to too. Enthusiastic is not strong enough to describe her.
She works hard so that she can help us learn. That makes me think that every one should show her Their energy in return.
The thing that encourages me most is the way she prances about on the stage like a reindeer that has just escaped into the wild.
She has enough energy to power all of us which is just as well be cause some times we are really tired.
She is obviously very fit and strong as she has big toned muscles.
She is the perfect person to wake us up on a monday morning.

cross country practise

WALT describe - with voice

Anger started to bubble up inside me. It was as if I had violent vegetable oil inside me. I clenched my fist even tighter as I saw them stop and start to walk then they started to kick the cones. I made a face in the struggle to control my rage. In my head I said "far out they don't even want to try and be successful." They should think about other people who want to be successful we can't do it with out them trying. Then my rage bubbled to high "Stop walking" I yelled " and don't cut the cone."

I'm running down the hill behind the swimming pool where the teachers can't see us. That is why people walk here. I get really angery when people walk because it is our team goal and I want to be successful even if they don't.
"you don't even need to run fast" I shouted back and then I was past them.

Monday, May 3, 2010

The journy with a great white shark

WALT create a picture with words

"This is boring" I said under my breath.

We've been down here for 15 minutes now and we haven't caught a thing yet unless you count the gross, green, slippery, wet seaweed that Noah caught and Even that wasn't big. Its really choppy today. We are in are kayak its called the big banana we call it that because its the shape of a banana and it is yellow with some blue. We are taking turns to fish of the back of the boat while two paddled and the other one rests on the side. its my turn to fish now.

"Hey I've got a bite!" I yelled, jumping up and rocking the boat wildly, causing Kara to drop her paddle, Noah to fall out of the boat, (lucky he had his life jacket on) me to drop the fishing rod and dad to fall violently over the front of the boat. "Oh sorry I didn't mean it "I said while hauling Noah out of the water "i-its-its fr-fr-freezing"said Noah teeth chattering violently while his lips turned blue.

"Hey where's the fishing rod"Kara exclaimed

"oh no, I dropped it" while getting Noah out of the water I had forgotten all about the fishing rod ''you dropped the rod" said dad

"n-no nee-need t-to arg-argue its its Th-there" stuttered Noah
"oh yeah" I said "look its moving away, quick"I jumped into the water grabbing the fishing rod. Straight away I started shivering wildly. It was as cold as jumping into the freezer.
I started to swim back to the boat but the big thing at the end of the rod started to pull me the other way.
"help" I yelled
"coming Zia"Dad yelled back
Dad jump into help me by grabbing me by the ankle but the thing at the other end was to Strong it pulled both of us with ease(we had our life jackets on). Kara and Noah were just standing there looking.
The journey on the fishing rod was horrible WHOSH! we bounced up and down on the big waves and rolled over the small ones. My lungs burned with the pressure
It didn't take to long to get where we were going. When we got there we realised with fright that the thing pulling us was a great white shark. We quickly surfaced and was glad to see the big banana paddling quickly towards us.

At that moment I made my greatest descuvery ever, I should have rememberd the shark was odvuosly wanting food when he bit the squid on the end of the fishing line, so he had took us to his feeding grounds all we had to do to catch a fish was reach down and grab one.
"Kara bring the boat over here" I yelled to the boat.
"Whats up?" asked Dad
"Look down" I told him
"wow"at that time the boat arived. as soon as noah saw the fish he dived in and grabed a fish and chucked it in the boat where Kara nocked it out. We did this untill we had six juicy fish in the boat.Yum I licked my lips

once we got in the boat we headed straight for shore.I can't wait to tell grandma!