“Could you PLEASE move out of my way,”said Maddy in a stern voice.
“Why?” asked the checky little kid sitting on the beam in front of Maddy.
“Because,” Whispered Maddy throw gritted teeth “I’m in a race and thanks to you I,m now losing,”
“all right,then,”He jumped off and ran away.
Monday, November 29, 2010
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Well done Zia
ReplyDeleteWhat you did well: You had all the right stuff
what you could do better next time: check your grammer
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